oh thanks .. some forget the punctuation :)

I apologize, the site does not seem to allow separate lines for comments. It was easier to read, spaced apart.

Poetic structure is difficult to correct, as the correction may change the intent of the author. "I want to open my heart to feel, good things free, and do what I like. The happiness I seek, to open hidden somewhere? I soon discover clues, and ..." ----- "I want to open my heart to feel good things. To be free and do what I like with/for the happiness. I seek to open hidden doors. Somewhere? I soon discover clues, and ..." These are different sentiments. Does this make sense to you?