How About My Writing Today ?

Is is/was the first day of summer vacation today, but I am still alone study English in the library studying English (rearranged the phrases) alone because I want to improve my written English writing. I think that if I still continue to practise my writing, one day I'll be successful. So, I joined in here in italki. I hope that someone can correct my mistakes or can suggest some better words or sentences (you already said 'correct mistakes) to change my mistake, and then make (improve) these sentences become better. And I will be learning from that. Whether you like or not. (what did you really want to say  'whether you ...' doesn't make sense here) Please, give me some advice. Thanks everyone.

How About My Writing Today ?

Its the first day of summer vacation today. But I still study English in the library alone because I want to improve my English writing. I think that if I still practice my writing one day I'll be successful. So, I join in here. I hope that someone can correct my mistakes r can suggest some words or sentences to change things and make these sentences become better. And I will be learning from that whether you like or not. Please, give me some advise. Thanks everyone.

this is a good try!  keep writing!