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A place that I've looking for, There is beautiful scene that I've looked forward;There is no human's protest and struggle there. Perhaps's different from this money's world.
Someone I want to be, He willing obedient to this social's rules;It's not much complaint for him to live in the world. But he knows that he can't ,and the pain would remain around him always, day by day.....
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There is* a place that I've been* looking for,.*There is beautiful scene that I've looked forward.*There is no human's protests* and or* struggles* there. Perhaps's it's* different from this money's world run by money.* Someone The person* I want to be, He is* willingly* obedient to this these* social's rules;It's There's* not much complainting* for him to live in the this* world. But he knows that he can't, and that* the pain would remain around him always, day by after* day.....
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