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The End of A Dream.
Although I was sleepy, I tried to finish reading the article:
A man was tired of sleeping on the floor, so he saved up for years to buy a real bed. He was proud that eventually he owned a bed which had springs and a mattress. He carried it on the roof of his houseBecause it was very hot. For the first two nights he slept very well but on the third night, a storm blew up. A gust of wind swept the bed off the roof and sent it into the courtyard. The man didn't wake up until the bed strucked the ground. Even though the bed was smashed into pieces, miraculously, he was unhurt. He glanced at the pieces of wood and metal and sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house. After he put it on the floor he promptly went back to sleep. Maybe he didn't think to wake up, because his dream was broken. I we all have a dream, and when the dream is achieved, we should treasure it.
Hannah
1/7/2015
The End of A Dream.
Although I am sleepy, I tried to finish reading an article. A man was tired of sleeping on the floor, so he saved up for years to buy a real bed. He was proud that eventually he owned a bed which had springs and a mattress. Because it was very hot, he carried it onto the roof of his house. For the first two nights, he slept had very well sleep, but a storm blew up at the third night. A gust of wind swept the bed off the roof and sent it into the courtyard. The man didn't wake up until the bed strucked the ground. Even though the bed was smashed in pieces, miraculously he was unhurt. He glanced graced at the pieces of wood and metal, he and sadly picked up the mattress and carried it into his house. After putting it on the floor he promptly went to sleep again. Maybe he didn't want think to wake up, because his dream was broken. I think even when we have a will make how dream, when the dream is achieved, we should treasure it once it has become a reality.
Hannah
1/7/2015
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