First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi,i am new here. i am a college student in shanghai, china. i plan to study abroad so i need to improve my english. i am learning japanese, too. i like travelling! i desire to go to europe and australia by myself. i also enjoy drawing. the best thing that i like to do in my spare time is seeing movies.
great to know you!

Hi, I'm new here. I'm a college student in Shanghai, China. I plan to study abroad, so I need to improve my English. I'm also learning Japanese. I like traveling! I want to go to Europe and Australia by myself. I also enjoy drawing. The thing I like to do the most in my spare time is going to the movies. 
It's great to know you!

Good job! Not very many errors. Remember to punctuate and capitalize though.