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God bless the injured. My second article : God bless the injured. ------------------------------------------------------------------- It’s start summer vacation in our country. Many students are exciting. Taiwan weather is very hot now. A lot people go swimming pool have fun. But the bad news on the last week. The swimming pool hold an activity of color party. The color dust was blow up! Suddenly, there was a “Boom”,and the pool become the fire sea... People screams,and runs,and cried.. The dust explosion scared everyone. I’m very sad about this news. I Wish the injured getting much better. God bless. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you for reading this article. Be so kind as to give me a reply, please.

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God bless the injured.

My second article : God bless the injured.
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It’s the start of summer vacation in our country.
Many students are excited exciting.
Taiwan weather The weather in Taiwan is very hot now.
A lot of people go to the swimming pool to have fun.
But the there were some bad news on the last week.
The swimming pool hold held an activity of color party.
The color dust blew up was blow up!
Suddenly, there was a “Boom”,and the pool became a sea of fire become the fire sea...
People screamed screams,and ran runs,and cried..

The dust explosion scared everyone.


I’m very sad about this news.


I Wish the injured are getting much better.
God bless.



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