My holiday in London

In November, I went to London for the first time. It was very cold but I still liked this town very much. Big Ben Bang and other monuments were wonderful. I spented all day in Hyde Park to walking. I love nature and little animals, such as squirrels. In London, I had difficulty to speak English and to understand the English language, so I want to improve my English level.

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My holiday in London

In November I went to London for first time. It was very cold but I liked this town very much. Big Ben and other monuments are wonderful. I spent  all day in Hyde Park walking. I love nature and little animals like  squirrels. In London I had difficulty speaking English and  understanding English language so I want improve my English level.

My holiday in London

In November I went to London for the first time. It was very cold but I liked this city very much. Big Ben and other monuments were wonderful. I spent all day walking in Hyde Park. I love nature and little animals like squirrels. In London I had difficulty  speaking English and understanding so I want improve my English level.