The rain in Suzhou
It often rains in recent days.June and July are rainy month in every year.I can not sleep well,because my bedding and mattress are wet.When I go to work,I should bring the umbrella or the raincoat,also I can not wear a skirt.
people often go out for tourism with their families,but they can not go for the rain these days in addition to watching TV , playing computer and cellphone.Actually, I like the rain, It clean the air.But I do not like it rains everyday.
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The rain in Suzhou
It has rained often in recent days. June and July are rainy months in every year. I cannot sleep well because my bedding and mattress are wet. When I go to work, I must bring the umbrella or the raincoat. also I cannot wear a skirt either.
People often go out on tours with their families, but they cannot go because of the rain these days. Instead, they must watch TV , play on the computer and cellphone. Actually, I like the rain, because it cleans the air, but I do not like it when it rains everyday.
Your basic syntax and grammar are good. The phrasing needs work, though. Also, remember to put a space after every period or comma.
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