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So Proud Of Being A 80's Baby Recently, I've watched a VCR named "80 后公民大典",it talks about the growing process of 80's babies. It really makes me feel a lot. When we were pupils we'd always been asked the same question "What is your ideal?" While, how could a pupil tell his ideal? At least I couldn't. My ideal were beautiful skirts, lovely hair and play all day with my friends, I loved Beyond and Ricky Martin when I was in primary school. We cut classes to watch World Cup in high school. We played guitar, sang songs in the university dormitory, we played computer games, chatted online and even some of us made online love affair. So we were given a strange name---Collapse Generation ! However, time goes by, no one calls us the Collapse Generation again! We've grown up, we have to shoulder our responsibility, and we do! Read newspapers you'll know it. To raise the national flag is us, to hold flowers standing on the podium is us, to be a teacher and go to the place where you would never want to go is us, even if all the buildings were collapsed, to go to the ruins to save more lives at the first time is also us, and we can give the commitment for our whole lives......... What is the matter we were naughty children? What is the matter we didn't have a great ideal? I'm so proud of being a 80's baby! This essay is a little too long, thanks for your patience!^^

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I'm So Proud Of Being to be A an 80's Baby

Recently, I've watched a VCR named "80 后公民大典",it talks about the growing process of 80's babies. process of growing up for the 80's babies. It really makes me feel moved me a lot.

When we were pupils we'd always been asked the same question "What is your ideal? ( In English you need to state your ideal what: ie your ideal way to look, your ideal job, your ideal holiday) " While, how How could a pupil tell say what his ideal is ? At least I couldn't. My ideals were beautiful skirts, lovely hair and playing all day with my friends, I loved Beyond and Ricky Martin when I was in primary school. We cut classes to watch the World Cup in high school. We played guitar, sang songs in the university dormitory, we played computer games, chatted online and even some of us even made had online love affairs. So we were given a strange name---Collapse The fallen Generation !

However, as time goes by, no one calls us the Collapse fallen Generation again! We've grown up, we have to shoulder our responsibility, and we do! If you Rread newspapers you'll know it. To raise the national flag is us now, to hold flowers standing on the podium is us now, to be a teacher and go to the place where you would never want to go is us now, even if all the buildings were collapsed, to go to the ruins to save more lives lifes at the first time is also us, and we can give the this commitment for our whole lives......... This would sound much more natural to me if you said 'Now we raise the national flag, hold flowers on the podium, we are teachers, we go to the places you dont want to go, If the buildings all collapsed we would go and help save lifes, this is us now and we can give this commentments our whole lives.

What does is the it matter that we were naughty children? What is the does it matter we didn't have a great ideals? I'm so proud of being a 80's baby!

This essay is a little too long, thanks for your patience!^^
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@Jerry: haha.....Nice joke! 其实那也是我的一个梦想!哈哈,希望你的这个great ideal 早日实现!!嘎嘎!^^
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@Sunny: 哈哈,我和你一样,也听不懂粤语,但还是喜欢他们的歌,特别是《海阔天空》。其实,如果有人把《海阔天空》用普通话翻唱,我想我未必喜欢!^^
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就是个小笑话,很高兴认识你们
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就是个小笑话,很高兴认识你们

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