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I am going to take a note for your request and we will try to do our best to accommodate you however it is not guarantee. Our hotel has lift so the floor where you are allocated shouldn't be a problem.
From Luton airport you can take a train to King Cross Station. There you can take the tube and with the circle line you will be at Paddington Station in 11 minutes. Or you can take a taxi in the station and it will take around 30 minutes to get to the hotel.
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I am going to take a note for of your request and we will try to do our best to accommodate you, however it is not guarantee I can't guarantee we will be able to. Our hotel has lift an elevator so the floor whereyou are allocated assigned to shouldn't be a problem.
From Luton airport you can take a train to King Cross Station. There you can take the tube and with the circle line you will be at Paddington Station in 11 minutes. Or you can take a taxi in at the station and it will take around 30 minutes to get to the hotel.
Best Regards
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I am going to note your request and we will try to do our best to accommodate you, however there is no guarantee. Our hotel has a lift, so the floor where you are allocated shouldn't be a problem.
From Luton airport you can take a train to King Cross Station. From there, you can take the tube and with the circle line you will be at Paddington Station in 11 minutes. Otherwise, you can take a taxi in the station and it will take around 30 minutes to get to the hotel.
Best Regards
*good effort, keep it up!*
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This letter is interesting because it illustrates some differences between British and American English.
"take note of your request" is very British. I would say "We have received your request."
"however there is no guarantee" British "We can not guarantee we will be able to accommodate your requests" American
"the floor where you are allocated" British "the floor where you are assigned, or the floor where your room will be located" American
"our hotel has a lift" British, "our hotel has an elevator" American
Leigh and J. Haywood didn't find much to correct because they're British, but Dave Americanized some of the sentences.
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I am going to take a note for of your request and we will try to do our best to accommodate you however it there is no(t) guarantee. Our hotel has a lift so the floor where you are allocated shouldn't be a problem.
From Luton airport you can take a train to King's Cross Station. There you can take the tube and with the circle line you will be at Paddington Station in 11 minutes. Or you can take a taxi in at/from the station and it will take around 30 minutes to get to the hotel.
Best Regards
Great work, Inma! An excellent piece of writing, with just a few small details to point out. Good job!
Leigh
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