6/27 diary I went to Kamakura in Kanagawa with my boyfriend. According to the forecast, it would be rain. But it had no rain, so we were glad. First,we bought free to ride ticket of bus and train in

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6/27 diary I went to Kamakura in Kanagawa with my boyfriend. According to the forecast, it would be rain. But it had no rain, so we were glad. First,we bought free to ride ticket of bus and train in Engaku Temple, it was so discount. We went to many temples by bus and train, Enoden. we went to Ajisai Temple. we saw many colors of hydrangeas, blue, purple, and pink. In additoin to them, we went to Turugaokahatiman Temple, and Hokoku Temple. We wrote strip of fancy papers for the Star festival in Turugaokahatiman Temple. Then, in Hokoku Temple, we had green teas and Japanese sweets, seeing many bamboos. We ate a lot of food in Kamakura, for example, ice creams ,rice crackers,Japanese pickled vegetables, and sausages. ultimately, we bought Hato sables for with our families and friends. It was so calm and fun in Kamakura. I want to go to Kamakura again in the future.

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6/27 diary

I went to Kamakura in Kanagawa with my boyfriend.
According to the forecast, it would be raining, but it did not rain, so we were glad.
First,we bought bus and train tickets so that we could get to Engaku Temple, the tickets were on a discount.
We went to many temples by bus and train, Enoden.
we also went to Ajisai Temple. we saw many colors like hydrangeas, blue, purple, and pink.
In addition to that, we went to Turugaokahatiman Temple, and Hokoku Temple.
We wrote on strips fancy papers for the Star festival in Turugaokahatiman Temple.
Then, in Hokoku Temple, we had green tea and Japanese sweets and we saw many bamboo trees.
We ate a lot of food in Kamakura, for example, we ate ice cream ,rice crackers,Japanese pickled vegetables, and sausages.
ultimately, we bought Hato sables for our family and friends.

It was so calm and fun in Kamakura.
I want to go to Kamakura again in the future.

Hi there :D. I corrected your entry and by the looks of it, you have great vocabulary but your grammar needs a little bit more work. Feel free to ask me any questions and keep on practicing ;)

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