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we're on opposite ends of the earth let me introduce myself first .my name is lixuchen .i am 22 years old . i am from china. i am a native Chinese speaker.i am a university student ,i major in accounting and information safety. now i live in Wuhan,China. i have two part-time jobs. one is teaching children math . another is sale wine.my hobbies are playing the basketball,programming and reading poems. i am new here . i have hung out on the website for a few days. how lucky i am . i made some friends from all over the world. everyone is different. One of the most impressive is Anna whose mother is Chinese. she is born in California. i can talk with her in Chinese and my poor English.it's funny that she always made me laugh by her “ugly face”.in fact, she is a sweet girl .but i am a serious person at almost time. My pronunciation is so poor he didn't realize it before.Because i am a native Chinese speaker and my teacher are Chinese too.Beside, i didn't communicate with a native English speakers before. However,it is OK.it's a sweet memory where Anna caught me pronounce some words. i have tried many times to pronounce the word "no",in the end ,i failed and i gave up ,and we changed another topic.Because i knew i would be a good English speakers some day. i am always online , internet is my second home. i like play the music ,watch the movies, chat with my friends and programming online, so i spend many times on the internet. besides, i am also a sentimental person.i always believe the saying that if we can only encounter each other rather than stay with each other,then I wish we had never.XD i registered the website , because i wanted to improve my English skills and make friends . I have a dream , i want to go to America , i have a dream ,i want to communicate with the top hackers by languages i have learned. i have a dream , if i fall in love with a girl , no matter where she is , I am able to fling caution to the winds to find her. we're on opposite ends of the earth. but we can meet on the website. So treasure this fate。 there are probably many mistakes , please help me put them right.thank you very much.

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We're on opposite sides of the globe

Let me introduce myself first .My name is lixuchen .I am 22 years old . i am from China. i am a native Chinese speaker.I am a university student and I  major in accounting and information safety.
Now I  live in Wuhan,China. I  have two part-time jobs. one is teaching children Math and  another is selling wine.my hobbies are playing the basketball,programming
and reading poems.

i am new here . i have hung out on the website for a few days. how lucky i am . i made some friends from all over the world. everyone is different. One of the most impressive is Anna whose mother is Chinese. She was   born in California. i can talk with her in Chinese and my poor English.it's funny that she always  makes  me laugh by her “ugly face”.in fact, she is a sweet girl .But I  am a serious person at almost time.

My pronunciation is so poor she  didn't realize it before.(?)Because i am a native Chinese speaker and my teacher are Chinese too.Besides, i didn't communicate with native English speakers before. However,it is OK.it's a sweet memory where Anna caught me pronounce some words. i have tried many times to pronounce the word "no",in the end ,i failed and i gave up ,and we changed to another topic.Because i knew i would be a good English speaker some day.

i am always online - the internet is my second home. i like to play the music ,watch movies, chat with my friends and  do programming online, so i spend  a long time on the internet. besides, i am also a sentimental person.i always believe the saying that if we can only encounter each other rather than stay with each other,then I wish we had never.XD ( I don't understand) 

I registered on  the website , because i wanted to improve my English skills and make friends . I have a dream , i want to go to America , i have a dream ,i want to communicate with the top hackers in languages i have learned. i have a dream , if i fall in love with a girl , no matter where she is , I am able to fling caution to the winds to find her.

we're on opposite ends of the earth. but we can meet on the website. So treasure this fate。

there are probably many mistakes , please help me put them right.thank you very much.

 

I have marked all the times you have used the letter i when it should be a capital letter I without changing.Also please remember to use a capital letter at the beginning of each sentence- I didn't mark every one because there are many.

 

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Hello Lixuchen and welcome to italki. I am sure you will make good progress on here.

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