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Happy holiday! Today,I went to Osiage with my friend. It has Tokyo sky tree. I was surprised by its size, It's 634 meters tall. Its view was very beautiful. after that, I watched planetalium. I could watch various sky in a day. I was a nice day.

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勝又さん、こんにちは。I made a couple of changes to your original entry. Feel free to ask me any questions and I hope it helps!
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Happy holidays!

Today,I went to Osiage with my friend. It has the Tokyo sky tree. I was surprised by its size, it's 634 meters tall. Its The view was very beautiful. After that, I watched the planetalrium.
I could watch various skyies in a day. It was a nice day.

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