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A practice Speaking of a place that can be good to relax, I'd like to tell you something about a cafe, which is near my home. The cafe serve all kinds of cofee, good drinks and delicacy snacks. The most important thing is that it provid a free WIFI, so I could even stay there for a whole day alone only with a laptop and a cup of coffee. Also, when I feel hungry, I can order for a pizza or pasta. Of cause I like to spent time and laugh together with my friends, But sometime I need to stay alone. As my body quiets down, my thinking mind will also get quieter and I'll feel more relaxed. So when I feel tired, or in a bad mood, I need to quiet down, and I think it's a perfect place for me to relax. This is preparing for my IELTS oral text, please help me to correcting my error. Thank you ~

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'As my body quiets down, my thinking mind will also get quieter and I'll feel more relaxed. So when I feel tired, or in a bad mood, I need to quiet down, . . As my body relaxes/becomes more relaxed, my mind will also become calmer . . I need to calm down . .
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A practice

Speaking of a place that can be good to relax, I'd like to tell you something about a cafe, which is near my home.
The cafe serves all kinds of coffee, good drinks and delicious snacks. The most important thing is that it provides free WIFI, so I could even stay there all day only with just a laptop and a cup of coffee. Also, when I get hungry, I can order for a pizza or pasta.
Of course, I like to spend time and laughing together with my friends, but sometimes I need to stay alone. As my body quiets down, my thinking mind will also get quieter and I'll feel more relaxed. So when I feel tired, or in a bad mood, I need to quiet down, and I think it's a perfect place for me to relax.

I am preparing for my IELTS oral text; please help me by correcting my errors. Thank you ~

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