Today, I write about my first diary.  I ate ra-men yesterday.  Ra-men is Japanese food.  It is so delicious for to me.  The recommended soup soup that I recommend is "Tnkotsu" and the recommended noodle noodle that I recommend is slender.***  I like ra-men very much.  But ra-men cost much calory has many calories so I must not eat it much often.

***You could also say "I recommend Tnkotsu soup with slender noodles."  This would be more simple and probably how most native speakers would say it.

Very good job!  I like ra-men, too!

My diary

Today I write about my day. I ate ra-men yesterday. Ra-men is a Japanese food. I think it is delicious. The soup is "Tnkotsu". And the noodle is slender. I like ra-men very much.But ra-men has many calories. So I must not eat it much.

私はそれが役に立てば幸い！(I hope it helps!)