My first time
It is my first time to write an essay on the internet.But I even don't know what to say.I love music、painting、science.I can introduce myself in Chinese fluently.But when it comes to English,my head is blank and I can't find any words to describe myself well as well as using Chinese .I know,everyone has his "first time".For my first time,I never expected it would be perfect.I only hope I can write something ，even if it is full of mistakes.
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My first time
It is my first time to writing an essay on the internet, but and I even don't know what to say. I love music, painting, and science. I can introduce myself in Chinese fluently, but when it comes to English, my head is blank and I can't find any words to describe myself well with, as well as using Chinese. I know that everyone has his "first time". For my first time, I never expected it would to be perfect. I only hope I can write something, even if it is full of mistakes.
There are actually only a few little mistakes, so it's looking good to me. Keep it up!
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My First Time
It is my first time to write an essay on the internet, but I don't know what to say. I love music, painting, and science. I can introduce myself in Chinese, but when it comes to English, my head is blank and I can't find any words to describe myself like I do when I speak Chinese. I know everyone has their "first time". I never thought that it would be perfect. I only hope I can write something, even if it is full of mistakes.
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