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my country Today I´m talking about my country that is Peru, and even though there are several things to tell to you about Peru it just will take you some minutes to read it,so left everything that you are doing and help me please. Peru is well know as Incas's land,incas were the amount of people who lived here a enticity that are my ancestors they've habited and growth this lands more than 2 millenials and they had more than 10 cultures untill the rise of incas's land as tawantinsuyo as a gruop placed here in Peru in a part of south america wich extend from south of chilean country to equatorian and part of argentinian and bolivian,they were well organized in the beggining of his empire their governor was called INCA and there were 14 untill they were conquered by spaniards,there are several things to admire here but most is machupiccu because is one of the wonders of the modern world,machu picchu is a one of the best demostration of design an d architecture the it was built with sote which has been pulled one above other,and it's stunning but nortolly Machu picchu you would enjoy here you also can see Nazca's line ans between others.that is almost for today i hope that you read it,and thank beforehand to review pd:I´m not a tourism guide my job completely diferent

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Hello, MEL! I hope these corrections help.  I don't expect you to understand everything I did here, but I hope that you can learn a few things, at least.  Peru sounds amazing.  I have a book about it, and I think I would really enjoy visiting there someday!

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Today, I´m talking about my country that is Peru, and even though there are several things to tell to you about Peru, it just will will just take you some (We would usually just say, "A few" here instead of "some")minutes to read it. So left stop everything that you are doing and help me, please.
Peru is well-known as the Incas's Incas' land. Incas were the amount group of people who lived here an enticity (I'm not really sure what you're trying to say here, because "enticity" is not a word in English. Are you trying to say "ethnicity", or something like that?). that They are my ancestors, and they've habited and growththis they inhabited and grew these lands for more than 2 two millenials millenia. and They had more than 10 ten cultures untill during the rise of the Incas's land Incas as Tawantinsuyo, as a gruop group placed here in Peru in a part of South America which extends from the south of Chilean country to Equatorian and part of Argentinian and Bolivian. (I'm not sure what you were really trying to say in this section, so I corrected it the best I could) They were well-organized in the beggining beginning of his the empire. Their governors was were called INCA, and there were 14 fourteen untill they were conquered by Spaniards. (Again, I'm not sure this is what you meant, so I'm sorry if my corrections are wrong here) 

There are several things to admire here, but the most admirable is Machu Picchu, because it is one of the wonders of the modern world. Machu Picchu is a one of the best demostrations of design an d and architecture. the It was built with sote stones which has been were pulled one above another, (You need a space after commas) and it's stunning. But nortolly Machu picchu you would enjoy here not only would you enjoy Machu Picchu, you also can see Nazca's Line, ans between among others. That is almost all for today, and I hope that you read it, and thank beforehand to review think about it before reviewing.
pd PS:I´m not a tourism guide. My job is completely different.

I enjoyed your writing here, MEL! Keep up the hard work, and it will pay off in the end!

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