Diary

Hi, my name is Ryotaro Matsukawa.
Today, I had a lot of beef for dinner in a restaurant. It was very delicious.
However, I ate too much, so I am suffering from stomachache.
After I had come back home, I watched TV for an hour. The TV program which I watched was very interesting.
By the way, I am a university student. Today, in English class, I heard that my classmate decided to go abroad to study English.
I envy him very much. I want to study in other countries in the future.
Thank you for your reading.

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red = correction

blue = suggeston

I've seen Japanese textbooks say that うらいましい=envy, but that isn't always correct. Envy often has a strong negative feeling in English. We use it when someone's feelings are wrong or too powerful. Jealousy isn't as heavy. So, we are more likely to say, "I'm jealous" rather than "I'm envious." However, where I live (Western US), "I'm jealous" sounds a little feminine. I think men are more likely to just say "I want to study in other countries in the future." 

Diary

Hi, my name is Ryotaro Matsukawa.
Todaey, I had a lot of beef for dinner in a restaurant. It was very delicious.
However, I ate too much, so I am suffering from a stomach ache. (need space)
After I had come back home, I watched TV for an hour.The TV program which I watched was very interesting.
By the way, I am a university student. Today, in English class, I heard that my classmate decided to go abroad to study English.
I envy (Since you're still envious of him) ied him very much. I want to study abroad in other countries in the future.
Thank you for your reading.