Introducing myself...
Hi guys!
Could you help me with my introduce?
I wrote:
"My name as you know, is Camila. I'm 26 years old. I'm from Rio de Janeiro but now I'm living in Piauí (another state of Brasil).
I'm married but I don't have kids, yet.
I studied to be a computer science teacher, but I don't work with this anymore.
I like beachs, going to the movie and going to church... I love my family, the animals, my books and watching TV series.
I studied English in a course 5 years ago and now I want to meet people that speak this language, to learn more. My English is not enough to me. I'd like to be fluente one day.
So... if you wanna be my friend and help me on this journey, please, send me a message! :)
See you!"
Can you corret it to me, please?
I appreciate it!
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Introducing myself...
Hi guys!
Could you help me with my introduce?
I wrote:
"My name as you know, is Camila. I'm 26 years old. I'm from Rio de Janeiro but now I'm living in Piauí (another state of Brasil).
I'm married but I don't have kids, yet.
I studied to be a computer science teacher, but I don't work with this anymore.
I like beaches, going to the cinema and going to church... I love my family, animals, my books and watching TV series.
I studied English in a course 5 years ago and now I want to meet people that speak this language, to learn more. My English is not enough to me. I'd like to be fluente one day.
So... if you wanna be my friend and help me on this journey, please, send me a message! :)
See you!"
Can you corret it to me, please?
I appreciate it!
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Introducing myself...
Hi guys!
Could you help me with my introduce?
I wrote:
"My name as you know, is Camila. I'm 26 years old. I'm from Rio de Janeiro but now I'm living in Piauí (another state of Brasil).
I'm married but I don't have kids, yet.
I studied to be a computer science teacher, but I don't work with this anymore.
I like beachs, going to the movie and going to church... I love my family, the animals, my books and watching TV series.
I studied English in a course 5 years ago and now I want to meet people that speak this language, to learn more. My English is not enough to me. I'd like to be fluent one day.
So... if you wanna be my friend and help me on this journey, please, send me a message! :)
See you!"
Can you corret it to me, please?
I appreciate it!
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