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I would like to start by talking about my residence.Currently,I live in a apartment with my parents in the suburbs.I prefer to live in a apartment,because there are almost all domicles in urban centers are apartment.And I'd like to live in the urban side because there are many pubilc facilities available.So it's easy to get round to do what we what.My favourite room in my house is my bedroom.One important reason is that I have decorated it by myself,and It's a perfect place to relax.When I feel tired,or in a bad mood,Idid lock myself in my room.It's my own place.
If at all possible,I would like to redecorate my house.I just don't like in the face of unalterable life style,even my room style.
And I wish I could move to an apartment which is near to the city center since I always took 40 minute on the road to date with my friends.
This is one of the IELTS oral practice.Please help me to decorate correct my fault.
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A practice
I would like to start by talking about my residence. Currently, I live in aN apartment with my parents in the suburbs. I prefer to live in aN apartment because (delete:there are) almost all OF THE domicIles in urban centers are apartmentS. ALSO, I'd like to live in the urban AREA because there are many pubilc facilities available. It's easy to get Around to do what we what. My favourite room in my house is my bedroom. One important reason is that I have decorated it by myself, and it's a perfect place to relax. When I feel tired, or in a bad mood, I lock myself in my room. It's my own place.
If at all possible, I would like to redecorate my house. I just don't like TO LOOK in the face of AN unalterable life style, even my room style.
ALSO, I wish I could move to an apartment which is near to the city center since I always TAKE (IT TAKES ME) 40 minute on the road to GO TO A date with my friends.
This is one of the IELTS oral practiceS. Please help me to decorate correct my (faultS) ERRORS.
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