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killing animals on purpose When I was an elementary school student, I used to be closely enter the school just before my classroom teacher called students names on Mondays. On a day, I was late for school as other days, and I saw students in younger grades gathered around a cat in the gate, and another kid was moving a big stone. I thought it was suspicious, but I ran past them. When I got quite a far from them by a distance, I heard a scream of the cat, then I realized the kids were bullying the cat, but I had no choice keep running to make it into my classroom upstairs. After school, when I came out of the school gate, I saw the body of the cat dead from a pressure of a big stone. Why they should've killed the cat? I still don't know. Some people kill animals by mistake because when they drive in a highway, it's hard to tell small creatures and they run over the animals accidentally. But the kids killed the cat on purpose.

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Great job!  I understand it well.  Just a few things:

 

killing animals on purpose

When I was an elementary school student, I used to get to school just before my classroom teacher called students' names on Mondays. One day, I was late for school as other days, and I saw students in younger grades gathered around a cat in the gate, and another kid was moving a big stone. I thought it was suspicious, but I ran past them. When I got quite far from them, I heard the cat scream. I realized the kids were bullying the cat, but I had no choice keep running to make it into my classroom upstairs. After school, when I came out of the school gate, I saw the body of the cat, dead from the pressure of the big stone.

Why did they kill the cat? I still don't know. Some people kill animals by mistake driving on the highway because it's hard to see small creatures, and they run over the animals accidentally. But the kids killed the cat on purpose.

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I saw here also, not just once time, with dogs, cats, mouses...they consider that as a game, an entertainment

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