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Someone can help me correcting this short introduction? Well, the Australian ambassador will offer a cocktail here in Brazilia to students who want to study in Australia. For that, I have to send a short introduction of me, why do I want to study there etc. So, if someone could read it and correct it, I would be glad :) I have never been in Australia, but I though about it when I was planning to finish my high school in another country unless Brazil - what did not even happened. I choose finish my studies here and started study International Relations in Universidade de Brasília (University of Brasilia). So that, this opportunity to study in Australia seems to be unique, and a possibility to improve my English skills and to know in a better way the culture and education of a country that is an excellence of it.

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Someone can help me correcting this short introduction?

Well, the Australian ambassador will offer a cocktail here in Brazilia to students who want to study in Australia. For that, I have to send a short introduction of me, explaining why do I want to study there etc.
So, if someone could read it and correct it, I would be glad :)

I have never been in Australia, but I though about it when I was planning to finish my high school in another country other than Brazil—which did not even happened. I finished my studies here and started studying International Relations at Universidade de Brasília (University of Brasilia). This opportunity to study in Australia is unique, and a possibility to improve my English skills and to know more thoroughly the culture and education system of your prestigious country.

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Someone can help me correcting this short introduction?

Well, the Australian ambassador will offer a cocktail here in Brazilia to students who want to study in Australia. For that, I have to send a short introduction of me, why do I want to study there etc.
So, if someone could read it and correct it, I would be glad :)

I have never been in Australia, but I thought about it when I was planning to finish my high school in another country unless Brazil - what did not even happened. I choose finish my studies here and started study International Relations in Universidade de Brasília (University of Brasilia). So that, this opportunity to study in Australia seems to be unique, and a possibility to improve my English skills and to know in a better way the culture and education of a country that is an excellence of it.

 

I'm not going to correct the whole thing because Andrés has made the needed corrections except he forgot to put the t   on the end of thought.

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