My Perfect Life.

Recently, I have been asking myself (wondering) "Just what would make up (is) the perfect life and world I aspire to?". Finally, after much soul searching, the answer came to me in a dream. (I have detected it.) In my perfect life, God willing, everyone is benign and people live in harmony. Those who are blessed with (always take advantage of their wealthy) wealth and beauty will descend from their high horses to help Les Miserables. In my perfect life, there are no armies, no navies, (navy, no cavalry) and no nuclear weapons. How wonderful to know that (Therefore,) people will no longer have to suffer (suffered from) painful separations, mothers will not have to say goodbye to (with) their sons, wives will no longer (not) drift apart from their husbands. In my perfect life, it is always autumn, with (when) golden leaves (are) floating (falling) gently from tree tops (together with) while the breeze ruffles (riffing) my hair and cools (cooling) my skin. Not forgetting (Morever,) ice cream! Of course, it will be (is) free, lollipops, too, will be (are) everywhere and the sky would, forever, be (is always) blue! Ultimately, in my perfect life, everyone falls in love!

Very imaginative piece, well-thought-out and constructed. I have suggested a few amendments you could make to enhance the article. Sounds like a wonderful world! Let's all escape there!!!  

My Perfect Life.

Recently, I have been wondering " What is the life I aspire for?". Finally, I have determined what it is. In my perfect life, everyone is benign and people live in harmony. Those who always take advantage of their wealthy and beauty will descend from their high horses to help Les Miserables. In my perfect life, there are no armies, no navy, no cavalry and no nuclear weapon. Therefore, people will no longer continue to suffered from painful separations, mothers will not no longer need to say goodbye with to their sons, wives will not drift apart from their husbands. In my perfect life, it is always autumn when golden leaves are falling gently together with the breeze riffing through my hair and cooling my skin. Morever, ice cream is free, lollipops are everywhere and the sky is always blue. Ultimately, in my perfect life, everyone falls in love!

Your perfect life sounds quite pleasant Anna. Your writing has improved greatly from when I first met you. Keep climbing and achieving mastery. Never stop being a dreamer :)