Please modify my English answer ver.2.
Q.What would you like to do in your environmental activity after this meeting? /200-400 words (NOT 200-400 letters)
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I am doing the activity for climate change. In particular, I am thinking about visualizing the emission of university and building the system of university environmental policy involving the student ,who are most users in university, toward the improvement. However, I have doubt about the current technology building a low carbon society and recycling society. To have an opinion, I am studying about biological approach to climate change by using microbe which contributes to pollution. In this meeting, I want to know the opinion and the activity of youth from foreign countries about my doubt, and get the hint for taking a view by discussing.
And I want to eye the international activities than just in the country. I aspire to making my activities more concrete and effective. So I need to become the environmental activist doing many kind of multidiscipline from which I can involve many youth, to poliy-level. After this meeting I will work up the energy-saving action in the university as well as studying hard about climate change and having my opinion to the United Nation Framework Convention on Climate Change If I come up with need to action, I will act and output from Japan to the world by using the network my organization has.
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There are sentences which i don't know what did you mean, cause they don't have any sence. I didn't count how many words are there. Because of that I'm sory.
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Please modify my English answer ver.2.
Q.What would you like to do regarding environmental activity after this meeting? /200-400 words (NOT 200-400 letters)
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activity that am in is regarding climate change. In particular, I am thinking about how to conduct the emission of university,and how to build the system of university environmental policy involving the students ,who most benefit in university, towards the improvement. However, I have doubts about the current technology building a low carbon society and recycling society. My opinion is based on my studie. I am studying biological approach to climate change by using microbe which are contributing to pollution. In this meeting, I want to know the opinion and the activity of youth from foreign countries about my doubts.
And I want to see the international activities other than just in the country. I strive that my activities are more concrete and effective. So I need to become the environmental activist how is doing many kind of multidiscipline from which I can involve many young people, to poliy-level. After this meeting I will work up the energy-saving action in the university as well as studying hard about climate change and having my opinion brought to the United Nation Framework Convention on Climate Change If I come up with need to act, I will act from Japan by using the network that my organization has.
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