Limitless

"Limitless" is an entertaining and impressive film. The film's plot is about the power of the science and how it could change the a human's lifes.

The mean main character is Eddie Morra (Bradley Cooper), a writer who didn't have ideas to write a new book to present to an important writer's company publisher. At the same time, Eddie Morra, had broken up with her his girlfriend (OR At the same time, Eddie Morra, had broken up with her his girlfriend), Lindy (Abbie Cornish), so he was really pessimistic about his situation because they were used to do everything together. He got used to started drinking to forget his problems.

One day, when he was walking to his house, he met with ("...he ran into his..." may be better if he only saw him briefly on his walk home) his ex-brother-in-law, who gave to him an innovateive and secret pill to increase the level of mind mental ability. Although Eddie thought that it wasn't a good idea, he accepted and took the pill. A few minutes after, Eddie started to feel different. While the effect of pill was working, he got to writing a gripping book to for the writer's company publisher. After reading it, they tried to hired him, Nevertheless, Eddie was already thinking in about how to get rich. He learned how to invest on the stock market and how to speak three languages (OR ... and he learn three languages...; it's best that both sides of the conjunction are "balanced") in several days. He known, knew if he invested on the stock market he would win make a lot of money in a short space of time.

After one month, he started to win make a lot of money and to make himself famous in on Wall Street. As a result, he started to have different problems about with his tolerance and addiction to those that kind of pill.

Pretty good! "Win" almost works for the stock market because it's like a game in many ways. However, "win" doesn't always work like "ganar," and "make" sounds better, at least to me.

Limitless

"Limitless" is an entertaining and impressive film. The film's plot is about the power of the science and how it could change the human's lives.

The main character is Eddie Morra (Bradley Cooper) a writer who didn't have ideas to write a new book to present to an important writer's company publisher/publishing company. At the same time Eddie Morra had broken up with her his girlfriend, Lindy (Abbie Cornish), so he was really pessimistic about his situation because they were used to doing everything together.

(OR 'They used to do everything together.') 

He got used to drinking to forget his problems. - The sentence is fine, but it would make more sense to say, He started drinking to forget his problems.

One day, when he was walking to his house, he met with his ex brother-in-law, who gave to him an innovate and secret pill to increase the level of mind*.

*his mental capacity/ability

Although Eddie thought that it wasn't a good idea he accepted and took the pill. A few minutes after, Eddie started to feel different. While the effect of pill was working (While the pill was working / While the pill was taking effect) he got to writing a gripping book to for the writer's publishing company. After reading it, they tried to hired him, nevertheless (however), Eddie was already thinking in about how to get rich. He learned how to invest on the stock market and speak three languages in several days. He knew if he invested on the stock market he would win a lot of money in a short space of time.

After one month, he started to win a lot of money and to make himself famous on Wall Street. As a result, he started to have different problems about his tolerance and addiction to those kind of pill.

*that kind of pill OR *those pills.

Well written, José Ramón.  Those pills sound very useful!  Do you know where I could buy some? :D

Good job!  Keep up the good work!

Leigh