I'm grateful of your reading and correction. Would you like to drink coffee? ( see picture @-@)

Crime is now a serious matter in our society because its level is increasing and more violent than in the past. I believe this is because of several reasons that should be considered seriously to find out effective solutions to improve the current situations.

It is clear violent crimes are caused mainly by the young criminals. One of the reasons is that they lack both good education and the directions from their parents. Thus, they are not aware of criminal acts that lead them to be in jail because they commit a crime untentionally. Moreover, children's thinking is easily affected by violent scenes in films and games so that they suppose crimes are just games. Take action films as the examples, some children are addicted in to these films and I think they can become heroes by murdering people. In my opinion, to reduce this kind of crimes, the society and individuals, especially parents, should contribute to educating younger generations. In addtion, we also also prevent crimes happening by not allowing children to watch TV so much. Instead, children should be encouraged to participate in outdoor activities to learn the world around them.

Another type of crimes is poverty crime that is often happening in developing countries. This crime is taken place by the poorer who lacks the basic conditions for living such as: food, clothes, etc. It is understandable. However, we can not tolerate for hurting people in any cases. I think we can combat poverty crimes by protecting our property carefully. Besides, the governments should make efforts to improve the conditions for the poorer people in our society. Last but not least, forcing new laws is also helpful in deterring offences I suppose.

In short, to make our world better and safer, this requires the efforts of both our society and individuals by doing practical actions.

I'm grateful of for your reading and correction. Would you like to drink coffee? ( see picture @-@)

Crime is now a serious matter in our society, because its level is increasing and it is becoming more violent than in the past. I believe this is due to because of several reasons that should be considered seriously, to find out effective solutions to improve the current situations.

It is clear that violent crimes are caused mainly by the young criminals. One of the reasons is that they lack both good education and the directions from their parents. Thus, They are not aware of the criminal acts that lead them to be (end up in) jail because they commit a crime *unintentionally. Moreover, children's thinking is easily affected by violent scenes in films and games, so that they suppose crimes are just games. Take action films as the an examples: some children are addicted in to these films, and I think they can become heroes by murdering people. In my opinion, to reduce this kind of crimes, the society and individuals, especially parents, should contribute to educating the younger generations. In addtion, we can also also prevent crimes from occurring/happening by not allowing children to watch TV so much. Instead, children should be encouraged to take part in/ participate in outdoor activities, to learn about the world around them.

Another type of crimes is poverty crime, that is often occurs/happensing in developing countries. This crime is committed taken place by the poorer people who lacks the basic conditions for living such as food, clothes, etc. It is understandable. However, we can not tolerate for hurting people in any circumstances cases. I think we can combat poverty crimes by protecting our property carefully. Besides, the governments should make an efforts to improve the conditions for the poorer people in our society. Last but not least, enforcing new laws is also helpful in deterring offences, I suppose.

In short, to make our world better and safer, this requires the efforts of both our society and individuals by doing in taking practical steps/actions.

*without being aware of it

I would like to drink coffee, but I can't see any here, so I have made my own.  Would you like some ?