Corrections · 1
Summer in Madrid.
How do you sleep during a hot summer(1)?. Madrid's summer is sometimes too warm and it is difficult to sleep at night. Because of this(2), people go out to the nearby villages at the weekend. For example, my village is one hundred and thirty kilometers from Madrid and it's a good place to spend the weekend. If you have a few more free days, of course, the beach is better :).
In other big cities, is it normal to spend the weekend in the villages that surround them?
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Blue = suggestion
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(1) I would say something like "How can you get to sleep during a hot summer?" here, but your sentence makes sense.
(2) 'Therefore' is a little too formal here.
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