Requesting an accomodation

TASK:
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter:

* explain your situation.
* describe the accommodation you require.
* say when you will need it.

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Ms Rose,

ANSWER:
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Dear Ms. Rose,

I am a German student and I am going to attending the "English Immersion Course for IELTS Students" at Greenmount College this summer.

I would require a lodging for this period of the course. Therefore, I kindly would like to ask, if you can provide me with a room starting with July 1st until August 30th.

If you have several different room categories available, I would be grateful, if you could send me some background information. I am fine with sharing a kitchen with several other roommates. In particular, However, I require a place within walking distance of the Greenmount College campus, and . Furthermore, I would much appreciate an internet connection capable of video conferencing.

From your website I understood, that various different payment methods are accepted to pay for the rent and deposit. Could you please let me know, if American Express is among your supported credit cards systems?

Thank you in advance!

Yours sincerely,
Mr. Jackson

REMARKS:
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153 words, 20 minutes.
Misspelled words: college

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