Rabbit
7 yeras ago I had a marvellous rabbit named Bibop.
When I came back at home it waited for me to made me parties.( in italiano usiamo dire fare le feste per gli animali Idon't know as to say that).
The rabbit died 7 years ago and I was very sad. ????
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Rabbit
7 years ago I had a marvellous rabbit named Bibop.
When I came back at home he it waited for me to play with him. made me parties.( in italiano usiamo dire fare le feste per gli animali Idon't know as to say that).
The rabbit died 7 years ago and I was very sad. ????
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My rabbit
Seven years ago, I had a marvellous rabbit named Bibop. When I went back home it was waiting for me to arrange a party.( in italiano usiamo dire fare le feste per gli animali Idon't know, how to say )
My rabbit died seven years ago and I felt very sad.
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Thank you...
The ????? are a keyboard mistake
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I don't think you can say "made me parties". You could say "to welcome me" or "and it welcomed me joyfully" or something like that.
What a sad story.But why the ?? at the end?
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