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today
Hello :)
I didn't go to school today. Actually there was no reason, I just wanted to have a rest.
I studied a bit and went shopping with my room mate for stuff to use at the weekend.
I had seaweed soup , a fried egg and pork.
Ah today was the birthday of my house mate (my housemate's birthday), so I cooked the soup for him. In korea, we eat seaweed soup on our birthdays.
Actually it's for mothers. It's said good for women.
I don't know exactly. Anyway we eat the soup (But we ate the soup anyway).
However rides were bulit in the park near my house.
I think it might be for a festival which is held tomorrow.
So there is a lot of loud music. Sometimes it's good but sometimes it's annoying :S
I'll go the festival tomorrow if I get up early :)
Thanks for reading and checking
The blue parts are not wrong but just suggestions ^_^
today
Hello :)
I didn't go to school today. Actually there was no reason, Just I wanted to have a rest.
I studied a bit and went shopping for using stuff at the weekend with my room mate.
I had seaweed soup , a fried egg and pork.
Ah today was a birthday of my house mate, so I cooked the soup. In korea, we eat seaweed soup.
Actually it's for mother. It's said good for woman.
I don't know exactly. Anyway we eat the soup.
However rides was bulit in the park near my house.
Mightbe I think it's for festival which is held tomorrow.
So there is a lot of music sound. Sometime it's good but sometime it's annoying :S
I'll go the festival tomorrow if I get up early :)
Thanks for reading and checking
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