Travels

Our world becomes more interesting every year. If you want to visit all places, you should travel during the whole life. But people have different opinions about travelling. For example, some of them believe that when you travel to other places, you experience new things and learn from them, while others usually argue that most people who go on holiday to other countries just lie on a beach for two weeks and don't experience the local culture. Who IS right?
As for me, traveLING IS a great choice FOR spendING THE holidays. Maybe they are EVEN more important than expensive apartments or cars. But no, cars are important for traveLING. When you travel, you can meet new people, make friends all over the world also TO learn ABOUT other cultures (Delete:to develop )and of course TO visit new wonderful sights. Finally, you can get lots of pleasant memories. Now I'm so young and just study at school, but I hope that in THE future I can travel as much as I want.
What about YOUR opinion that on holiday in other countries you do nothing, except LIE on a beach? I think PEOPLE THAT HAVE THIS OPINION spend their holiday at home while watching TV (delete:or anything else) and never want to try ANYthing new. Or maybe this opinion IS AN EXAMPLE OF people who judge others by themselves. I think nobody THAT goes on holiday to other countries just lies on a beach there. One of the reasons for visitING sights or experiencING the local culture is human interest. Doesn't it? On the other hand, I don't believe that people will pay a lot of money just for getting a tan abroad. It's so strange for me. Well, I hope I proved that this opinion is wrong.
All in all I like THE opinion that 'travel broadens the mind' (Slang, Delete:coz) BECAUSE I think so.

Travels

Our world becomes more interesting every year. If you want to visit all places, you should travel during the your whole life. But people have different opinions about traveling. For example, some of them believe that when you travel to other places, you experience new things and learn from them, while others usually argue that most people who go on a holiday vacation to other countries just lay on a beach for two weeks and don't experience the local culture. Whose opinion are is right? 

As for me, traveling are is a great choice to spend holidays. Maybe even they are even more important than expensive apartments or cars. But no, cars are important for traveling. When you travel, you can meet new people, make friends all over the world, also learn other cultures to develop and of course visit new wonderful sights. Finally, you can get lots of pleasant memories. Now I'm so young and I'm just studying at school now, but I hope that in the future I can travel as much as I want.
What about the opinion that when going on holiday vacation in other countries you do nothing, except for lying on a beach? I think such opinion have the people that have this opinion are the ones who spend their holiday at home while watching TV or anything else and never want to try something new. Or maybe people who have this opinion can have are people who judge others by and not themselves. I think nobody who goes on holiday vacation to other countries just to lie on a beach there. One of the reasons for visit traveling is sightseeing or experiencing the local culture. It's human interest isn't it? On the other hand, I don't believe that people will pay a lot of money just for getting a tan abroad. It's so strange for me. Well, I hope I proved that this opinion is wrong. 

All in all I like agree with the opinion that "travel broadens the mind" coz I think so.