Hi Виктория

Great article. 

I have tried to get the ball rolling with some comments below. I hope these are helpful to you.

Let me know if you have any queries.

Have a good evening!

Just to mention that  behaviour = UK English; behavior = US English. I think you tend to use US English...

I think that TV plays an important role in our lives nowadays.

Or

I think that TV is starting to play an important role in our lives.  

In fact, we spend nearly 2-3 hours every day in front of a television screen, watching education and entertainment programmes.

How does this habit influence on us? On the one hand, TV motivates us to take action, for example  when we watch inspirational films or some educational shows. On the other hand, we waste precious time, which we could spend with our families.

First of all, motivating movies help us to believe in ourselves and go forward.

Indeed, films about real, famous people who have struggled in their lives are the most popular nowadays.

The viewers recognise life values, compare main heroes` problems with theirs and want to improve themselves after watching. For example, after watching the movie «Legend 17» about the famous Russian hockey player Valerii Harlamov I decided that nothing is impossible / we can achieve anything.

How do movies or television influence people`s behavior?

Could you please show me my mistakes? :)

How do movies or television influence people`s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.


I think that TV starts to play an important role in our lives nowadays. In fact, we spend near 2-3 hours every day near television, watching education and entertainment programs. How does this habit influence on us? On the one hand, TV motivates us to act for actions, when we watch inspiritational films or some educational shows. On the other hand, we waste precious time, which we could spend with our families.

First of all, motivational movies help us to believe in ourselves and go forward. Indeed, films about real famous people with hard destinies are the most popular nowadays. The lookers viewers realize life values, compare main heroes' problems with theirs and want to improve themselves after watching. For example, after watching the movie «Legend 17» about famous Russian hockey player Valerii Harlamov, I decided that there is nothing impossible in our lives (or "nothing is impossible in life")

Secondly, watching of some TV programs leads to unification of people. For instance, it could be football or hockey matches, when everybody supports for their teams. In fact, when Olympic Games 2014 were in Russia, main part of most Russians watched them on TV. I think that such events bring people a feeling of the unity and inspiration.

Unfortunately, TV has bad sides too, because people spend a lot of precious time watching it. Today everybody has a television at home and watching TV has become into a the permanent habit. In my opinion, we watch huge amount of family comedies, instead of spending time with our families. I am convinced that it is more valuable to live in reality.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that TV made our lives brighter: we became convinced in ourselves and more educated (or "we believe in ourselves and we are more educated"), and there is more solidarity. However, it is extremely important to not spend all your free time watching TV, but do something as great as in movies in your real life.

Very good entry! Your English is great. :)

How do movies or television influence people`s behaviour?

Could you please show me my mistakes? :)

How do movies or television influence people`s behaviour? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.


Nowadays I think that TV plays  an important role in our lives nowadays. In fact, we spend about 2-3 hours every day near television, watching educational or entertainment programs. How does this habit influence on us? On the one hand, TV motivates us for actions, when we watch inspirit films or some educational shows. On the other hand, we waste our precious time, which we could spend with our families.

First of all, motivating movies help us to believe in ourselves and go forward. Moreover, films about real famous people with hard destinies are the most popular today. The lookers realize life values and compare main heroes` problems with theirs and they want to improve themselves after watching. For example, after watching movie «Legend 17» about famous Russian hockey player Valerii Harlamov I decided that there is nothing impossible in our lives.

Secondly, watching of some TV programs leads to unification of people. For instance, it could be football or hockey matches, when everybody supports for their teams. In fact, when Olympic Games 2014 were in Russia, main part of Russians watched them on TV. I think that such events bring people to feel of part of the unity and inspiration.

Unfortunately, TV also has bad sides too, because people spend a lot of precious time watching it. Today everybody has a television at home and watching TV became into the permanent habit. In my opinion, we watch huge amount of family comedies, instead of spending time with our families. I am convinced that it is more valuable to live in reality.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that TV made our lives brighter: we became more self-confident convinced in ourselves, more educated and more solidary. However, it is extremely important to not to spend all your free time watching TV, but do something great - like it happens in movies - in your real life.

Quite good but you should pay more attention on the way through which you express your thoughts. Sometimes they are a little bit confused and you use too many words when you could use only few.

The red words are mistakes, green ones alternatives.

How do movies or television influence people`s behavior?

Could you please show me my mistakes? :)

How do movies or television influence people`s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.


I think that TV starts to play an important role in our lives nowadays. In fact, we spend near 2-3 hours every day in front of  television, watching educational and entertainment programs. How does this habit influence  us? On the one hand, TV motivates us for actions, when we watch inspirit films or some educational shows. On the other hand, we waste precious time, which we could spend with our families.

First of all, motivating movies help us to believe in ourselves and go forward. Indeed, films about real famous people with hard destinies are the most popular nowadays. The watchers realize life values, compare main heroes` problems with theirs and want to improve themselves after watching. For example, after watching movie «Legend 17» about famous Russian hockey player Valerii Harlamov I decided that there is no impossible in our lives.

Secondly, watching of some TV programs leads to unification of people. For instance, it could be football or hockey matches, when everybody supports for their teams. In fact, when Olympic Games 2014 were in Russia, main part of Russians watched them on TV. I think that such events bring people feeling of the unity and inspiration.

Unfortunately, TV has bad sides too, because people spend a lot of inestimable time watching it. Today everybody has a television at home and watching TV became into the permanent habit. In my opinion, we watch huge amount of family comedies, instead of spending time with our families. I am convinced that it is more valuable to live in reality.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that TV made our lives brighter: we became convinced in ourselves, more educated and more solidary. However, it is extremely important to not spend all your free time watching TV, but do something great as in movies in your real life.