Search from various English teachers...
China flagSugar
Dragon Boat Festival I am so gald that i will rest for three days ,The Dragon Boat Festival is coming,then there are a lot of delicious food in these days,i think i will have a wonderful travel. we can eat zongzi,pidan and so on in this day, The Dragon Boat Festival is an important festival in china,it has long history,It comes from a historical figure whose name was quyuan, he was a loay person, He is a poet who had written many poems, we all respect him very much!,The Dragon Boat Festival is memory of him.

Corrections · 1

0

Dragon Boat Festival

I am so gald glad that i will rest for three days. The Dragon Boat Festival is coming. then There are a lot of delicious food in these  the days. I think i will have a wonderful travel. trip.
We can eat zongzi, pidan and so on in this day. The Dragon Boat Festival is an important festival in china, it has a long history, It comes from a historical figure whose name was quyuan. He was a ?loay?person. He is was a poet who had written many poems. We all respect him very much!, The Dragon Boat Festival is our memory of him.

 

Very good. I'm not sure whas loay is --> A mispelling? I've capitalize the beginnings of sentences (the first word of a sentence starts with a capital letter), and changed a few commas ---> , to periods ---> .


If something has yellow, then I have added it. If it has a light through it, it should be removed.

 

Hope that helps. Very good though

 

 

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today