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Sun and water in Valencia. Today is a special day. Why? Because it's my friend's birthday and the sunrise was with a brilliant sun. For that, in first hour in this morning I have decided to go to the beach. I'm in a beach of Valencia city right now, called Malvarosa. I'm really comfortable because although sun is hard there is wendy too. I have swum under water and now i'm writing this while i'm listening english language everytime. In this beach there are a lot people from the other countries, because the weather in Valencia is fantastic right now. I'm going to follow enjoying... :)

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Sun and water in Valencia.

Today is a special day. Why? Because it's my friend's birthday and the sunrise was with a brilliant sun. For that, in the first hour in this morning, I have decided to go to the beach. I'm in a beach in Valencia city right now, called Malvarosa.

I'm really comfortable because although the sun is hard* there is wendy** too. I have swum under water and now I'm writing this while I'm listening to English language everytime***. In this beach there are a lot people from the other countries, because the weather in Valencia is fantastic right now.

I'm going to continue enjoying it... :)

 

* We usually say that the sun is "shining hard" or "shining very brightly"

 

** [Do you mean 'wind'/viento?]

 

*** Is it a language learning course called "English Language Everytime" or by 'everytime' do you mean 'at the same time'/al mismo tiempo?

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