Hi everyone

Hi, my name is Jihyun
I am working in a hospital . I am a nurse
I love my job, but I am tired care for patient (Not really sure what you mean) 
l live in Korea , and I don't speak English very well. 
I hope I want to learn how to speak English well and so I'm trying to learn English right now

l woke up at 6:00 and I washed my face and cleaned my hair. 
I had breakfast that is was chicken-doritang and then I had went to work at 7:00. 

Great Job! I hope that helped.

Hi everyone

Hi, my name is Jihyun.
I am working in a hospital. I am nurse.

I love my job, but I am tired of taking care for of patients. (If you are talking about just one patient, then it's "tired of taking care of a certain patient.")
l live in Korea and I don't speak English very well. 
I hope, and I want, to speak English well, and I am trying to learn English right now.

l woke up at 6:00 and, washed my face, and cleaned my hair.
I had chicken-doritang for breakfast that is, and then I had to go to work at 7:00.

Keep on practicing and learning!