Hi I want to show my nephew to you!

Hellow nice people, how are you? well I'm doing writing this post because I want to improve my English writing english and well in this case I want to will introduce you to my nephew. His name is Tobias, and he is my nephew... well He is a little different from than me because he is white and blond and I'm brown skinned(My skin) and with brown hair (My hair). In this picture he was has 2 years old, but now he is 5 years old. He likes to play to the drumbs, yes, with at his young age he likes the drumbs... I think that he will be able to play the drumbs very well in a few years. Well that´s all, I await your corrections and if you can tell me other ways to express what I want to say more correctly, I will thank you. Cheers, Paul.

Hi I want to show my nephew!

Hellow nice people, how are you? Well i'm doing this post because I want to improve my written English and well, in this case, I will introduce you to my nephew. He is  His name is Tobias, and he is my nephew... well he is looks a little diferent than me because he is white pale and blond and I'm brown tan (My skin) and brown brunette (My hair). In this picture he has is 2 years old but now he is 5 years old. He likes to play to the drumbs, yes, even though he is young, he likes the drumbs... I think that he will be able to play the drumbs very well in a few years. Well that´s all, I await your corrections and if you can tell me other ways to express what I want to say more correctly I will be thankful. Cheers, Paul.

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Some advice: I know in Spanish you can sometimes drop "yo" like "tengo un gato" but in English the subject ( like I, you, he, she) always has to be there.

Happy learning :)

American English Corrections

Hi, I Want to Show You My Nephew! Titles need to be capitalized properly.

Hello, nice people. How are you? Well, I'm writing this notebook entry That's what italki.com calls them in English. because I want to improve my English writing skills and well, in this case, also because I want to introduce you to my nephew. His name is Tobias, and he is my nephew... He is a little different than me because he is white and blond and I'm tan (skinned) and brunette. In this picture, he is 2 years old but now he is 5 years old We usually don't repeat "years old" since it is clear from the context that you are talking about someone's age. He likes playing the drums Or "He likes to play the drums". Yes, even though he is young, he like the drums... I think that he will be able to play the drums very well in a few years. Well, that's all. I await your corrections and if you can tell me other ways to express what I want to say more correctly, I will be very thankful. Or you could say, "I'd appreciate it if you could tell me other ways to express what I have written more correctly." Cheers, Paul.