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An experince of meeting foreigner
It is so amazing that I have met two foreigners in Taiwan this week.
One is from England,and another is from Germany.
The first one who comes from England is a mix of African-Indian.
He was here for getting working experience while he's just 17 years old.
In the beginning,I didn't really want to go out with him because he was so rude to me when we chatted online. But when I talked to him face to face,I thought he was not really a bad guy.
So I went to watch Jurassic World with him next day.
I was always trying to be nice to foreigners,because I treated myself as a representative of Taiwan. Unfortunately,I was so disappointed with people who took your kindness as granted.
Of course you were going to back your country after few days.
However,you didn't have to treat me so rudely by telling me "I am going to forget about everything with you in Taiwan."
I felt so hurt when I heard about it ,but I also knew I have done nothing wrong.
That was why I got recovered from the sadness quickly,and thanked to my good friend cheered for me also.
If you ask me do you regret for going out with him.
The answer is no , because I have lots of fun and learned lots of things from him.
Such as culture,food,religion and so on.
I think we probably can't be friends anymore,and I doubt the friendship between us is real or not.
Confucius said"When I walk along with two others, they may serve me as my teachers.
I will select their good qualities and follow them, their bad qualities and avoid them."
The second one is from Germany,and he speaks perfect Chinese.
I think he must have worked hard with it so I respected him a lot.
We ate the ice cream in a old western style architecture which was rebuild as a cake shop.
We shared about our life experience and philosophy and had a good time..
I really like him and hope he will enjoy the traveling in Taiwan.
An experince of meeting foreigner
My experience with meeting foreigners
It is so amazing that I have met two foreigners in Taiwan this week.
It's amazing, but I met two foreigners in Taiwan this [past] week!
One is come from England,and another is come from Germany.
One was fom England, the other from Germany.
The first one who comes from England is a mix of African-Indian.
The parents of the visitor from England were Africa and India.
He was here for getting working experience while he's just 17 years old.
He was just 17 and he was here to gain work experience.
In the beginning,I didn't really want to go out with him because he was so rude to me when we chatted online.
At first, I didn't really want to go out with him because he was rude when we chatted online.
But when I talked to him face to face,I thought he was not really a bad guy.
But when I talked to him face-to-face, I didn't think he was such a bad guy.
So I went to watch Jurassic World with him next day.
So I went to see Jurassic World with him the next day.
I was always trying to be nice to foreigners,because I treated myself as a representative of Taiwan.
I always try (OR: I have always tried) to be nice to foreigners, because I see (OR: consider) myself a representative for Taiwan.
Unfortunately,I was so disappointed with people who took your kindness as granted.
Unfortunately, I have been disappointed by people who took my kindness for granted.
Of course you were going to back your country after few days. However,you didn't have to treat me so rudely by telling me "I am going to forget about everything with you in Taiwan."
Of course you were going to go back your country after few days, but you didn't have to be rude and say, "I am going to forget everything I did with you in Taiwan."
I felt so hurt when I heard about it ,but I also knew I have done nothing wrong.
This (OR: Hearing this) hurt my feelings, but I also knew I had done nothing wrong.
That was why I got recovered from the sadness quickly,and thanked to my good friend cheered for me also.
I got over my sadness quickly, and thanked my good friend who cheered me up.
If you ask me do you regret for going out with him.
The answer is no , because I have lots of fun and learned lots of things from him.
Such as culture,food,religion and so on.
If you ask me if (OR: whether) I regret going out (OR: having gone out) with him, the answer is "no", because I had lots of fun and learned a lot about things like culture, food, and religion.
I think we probably can't be friends anymore,and I doubt the friendship between us is real or not.
We probably can't be friends anymore (OR: We probably won't remain friends), and I doubt there was even a real friendship between us.
Confucius said"When I walk along with two others, they may serve me as my teachers.
I will select their good qualities and follow them, their bad qualities and avoid them."
Confucius said, "When I walk along two(?) others, they serve me as my teachers. I will recognize and follow their good qualities, while avoiding their bad qualities."
The second one is from Germany,and he speaks perfect Chinese.
The second visitor was from Germany, and he spoke perfect Chinese.
I think he must have worked hard with it so I respected him a lot.
He must have worked hard [to do that], so I had a lot of respect for him.
We ate the ice cream in a old western style architecture which was rebuild as a cake shop.
We ate ice cream in an old, western-style restaurant which was rebuilt as (OR: "used to be" -- I'm not sure which you mean) a cake shop.
We shared about our life experience and philosophy and had a good time..
We shared (OR: talked about) our life experiences and philosophy, and had a good time [together].
I really like him and hope he will enjoy the traveling in Taiwan.
I really like him and I hope he enjoys his visit to (OR: stay in) Taiwan.
An Experiences of meeting foreigners (Making the subject and object both plural better represents the stories you are telling.)
It is so amazing, that I have met two foreigners in Taiwan this week.One is come from England, and another is come from Germany.
The first one who comes from England is a mix of African-Indian.
He was here for getting working experience while he's just 17 years old.
In the beginning, I didn't really want to go out with him because he was so rude to me when we chatted online. But when I talked to him face to face, I thought he was not really a bad guy.
So I went to watch Jurassic World with him next day.
I was always trying to be nice to foreigners because I treated myself as a representative of Taiwan. Unfortunately,I was so disappointed with people who took your my kindness as granted. (You are talking from the first person perspective about yourself so "my" is more correct here. "your" is incorrect and awkward, but still easily understandable.)
Of course you were going to back your country after few days, however, you didn't have to treat me so rudely by telling me saying, "I am going to forget about everything with you in Taiwan." (This could be said with a compound sentence like this. It is more conversational and fluid, but not necessarily more correct than how you did it. You start the second sentence with "However" which operates as a conjunction in a compound sentence. "saying" is a more common word to use when directly quoting someone. "telling me" is more common when you will be paraphrasing what was said.)
I felt so hurt when I heard about it that, but I also knew I have done nothing wrong.
That was why I got recovered from the sadness quickly, and thanksed to my good friend who cheered for me also.
If you ask me, "Do you regret for going out with him."
The answer is no , because I have had lots of fun and learned lots of things from him. such as culture, food, religion and so on.
I think we probably can't be friends anymore,and I doubt whether or not the friendship between us is real. or not.
Confucius said, "When I walk along with two others, they may serve me as my teachers.
I will select their good qualities and follow them, their bad qualities and avoid them."
The second one is from Germany, and he speaks perfect Chinese.
I think he must have worked hard with at it, so I respected him a lot.
We ate the ice cream in a building with old western style architecture which was rebuild as a cake shop.
We shared about our life experience and philosophy and had a good time..
I really like him and hope he will enjoy the traveling in Taiwan.
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