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The Aussie way is to just live life with a smile, and enjoy all that our their country has to offer. The Australian culture shows seems to be a good way of life, and they have friendly communities/good community spirit. The communities is are helpful, and the people like telling the jokes. They're afraid of/dislike/avoid confrontation about a frank discussion provide a very different point of view (not sure what you intended here, so I have left it unedited) They prefer avoiding/to avoid speaking of one's problems, or talking negatively about negative aspects.

Tips:

In Victoria, you should get some warm clothes and blankets during the winter season. The weather in this region of Australia area was dull and overcast, as result as so I advise them you to get a windproof jacket and boots.
You should speak with the staff in order to improve their your language, and to get to know other their culture. But also, In particular it’s essential to read the menus before on the Aireys Pub website, before meals, it is a good way to know get familiar with the various dishes, and allows you to have random job by manager(???).

Feelings about Australia, its people, and the Australian way of life

General presentation about 'Wood house': (at first I was unsure whether you meant 'a timber house' but I guess you mean 'Wood house')

Only kilometres from one of Victoria’s beaches, The (leave out 'the' if it is in fact the name) Wood house is located close to Aireys Inlet on Bimbadeen drive road. It compose comprises two residences, in (these being the main buildings) - the Wood family accommodate residence/house and another (backpackers) building residence.
In the backpackers accommodation residence, there are two bedrooms, one bathrooms (smiles! you made the plural singular, and the singular plural!) and open plan livingroom and kitchen. The Wood house grounds and garden are attractive way by with tennis court, big garden and trampoline allowing guests to decompress stretch and relax.

Feelings about Australia, the people, and Australian life:

The Australians improve their quality of life by participating in practicing physical sporting activities. Lots of Australian people balanceing the time dedicated to study with need to practice by playing sports.
Besides However, sport isn't the alone only way for improvingement of the lifestyle, because the yoga and mindfulness/contemplation(?) also permit also one/them to feel relaxed but focussed and concentrate. Australians love sport because they spend lots of their free time outdoors and practice engage/participate in surfing, swimming, diving and football. Also the Australians are very keen on football codes, team and bet on their favourite teams every week in the pub.

About food culture: Australians like eating meat, especially chicken, beef and lamb. However, I was surprised that Australian cook few Europeans dishes, like such as French and Greek cuisines. During my internship, I tasted various local meals in the Pub and this permitted me to be totally immersed in and lived their food culture. Australians consumes sufficient/plenty of/adequate vegetables, and prefer eating it them raw.

Feeling about Australia, people and Australian life

General presentation about the Wood house:

Only kilometres from one of Victoria’s beaches, the Wood house is located close to Aireys Inlet on Bimbadeen drive road. It is composed of two residences, in the main, the Wood family accommodate [I am not sure what this means] and another backpackers' residence.
In the backpackers' residence, there are two bedrooms, one bathroom and open plan living room and kitchen. The Wood house is attractive way by and has a tennis court, a big garden and a trampoline that allows you to decompress and relax.

Feeling about Australia, people and Australian life:

The Australian improve their quality of life by practicing physical activities. Lots of Australian people balance time dedicated to study with the need to practice sports.
Besides, sports isn't the only way for improvement of lifestyle because the yoga and mindfulness also permit you to feel relaxed and concentrate. Australians love sport because they spend lots of their free time outdoors surfing, swimming, diving and playing football. Also, the Australians are keen on football and bet on the favourite teams every week in the pub.

About food culture, Australians like eating meat, especially chicken, beef and lamb. However, I was surprised that Australian cook few European cuisines like French and Greek. During my internship, I tasted various local meals in the pub and this permitted me to be totally immersed and live in their food culture. An Australian consumes sufficient vegetables and prefers eating them raw.

The Aussie way is to just live life with a smile and enjoy all that our country has to offer. The Australian culture has a good way of life and friendly communities. The communities are helpful and people like telling jokes. They're afraid of confrontation and frank discussions that provide a very different point of view. They prefer avoiding one's problems or and dislike talking about negative aspects of things. [I was not sure what you meant by these last two sentences - I tried to correct it to make sense.]


Tips:

In Victoria, you should get some warm clothes and a blanket during the winter season. The weather in Australia area was dull and overcast as result as I advise you to get a windproof jacket and boots. [Was it windy too?]
You should speak with the staff in order to improve your language and know other culture. But also, it’s essential to read the menus before on the Aireys Pub website. It's a good way to learn about various dishes and allows to have random job by manager [I am not sure what you mean by the end of this sentence, so I cannot correct it.]

Feeling about Australia, People, and Australian life

General presentation of the Wood house:

Only a few kilometres from one of Victoria’s beaches, the Wood house is located close to Aireys Inlet on Bimbadeen Drive road. It is composed of two residences. In the main residence is the Wood family and backpackers occupy the other residence.
In the backpackers' residence, there are two bedrooms, one bathroom, and an open plan living room and kitchen. The Wood house has an attractive tennis court, a big garden, and a trampoline that allows the residents to decompress and relax.

Feeling about Australia, People, and Australian life:

Australians improve their quality of life by practicing physical activities. Lots of Australian people balance their time between studying and practicing sports.
However, sports isn't the only way to improve health; yoga and mindfulness also help by making people feel relaxed and by practicing concentration. Australians love sports because they spend lots of their free time outdoors practicing surfing, swimming, diving and football. Also, Australians enjoy their football teams and bet on the favourite teams every week in the pubs.

Australians like to eat meat, especially chicken, beef and lamb. However, I was surprised that Australians cook a few other European dishes like French and Greek cuisine. During my internship, I tasted various local meals at the Pub which permitted me to be totally immersed in their food culture. Australians consume many vegetables and prefer to eat them raw.

The Aussie way is just to live life with a smile and enjoy all that the country has to offer. A good way of life and friendly communities are part of Australian culture. These communities are helpful and many people have a good sense of humor. They're afraid of confrontation when it comes to frank discussions that provide a very different point of view. They prefer avoiding one's problems or talking about negative aspects in one's life.


Tips:

In Victoria, you should get some warm clothes and blanket during the winter season. The weather in my area in Australia was dull and overcast. As result, I advise getting a windproof jacket and boots.
You should speak with the staff in order to improve your language and get to know their culture. But also, it’s essential to read the menus ahead of time on the Aireys Pub website. This is a good way to know various dishes and allows to have random job by manager. (I wasn't sure what you were saying here)