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Staring at The Greek Shore
This shot was taken in at a little beach near Karavostasi, which was way better than the main beach shore, because due to the few people who were there attended it and the crystal clear water.
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Staring at the greek shore
This shot was taken in at a little beach near Karavostasi, which was way better than the main shore, due to the few people who attended it lack of people and the crystal clear water.
https://500px.com/photo/80904933/staring-at-the-greek-shore-by-dave-queva?from=user_library
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It's a wonderful photo. The title is okay (you can use lower caps for all but the first word: it is a matter of style). My question is "the main shore of what?" Of Greece? Also, I suggest "much better," because "way better" sounds a bit too slangy. Of course, the choice is yours.
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