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Reading is the best way to broaden one's vocabulary, so I have begun reading the story of Peter Pan by James Barrie. I thought it would be an easy and joyful book, as it was written for children, but it isn't. It's a complicated book, not only because there are many difficult phrases and sentences, but also because it has a dark storyline. Peter pan, the boy that could never grow up, was created by J. Barrie in memory of his brother who died when he was 9 years old.
The other children in the story grow older, but don't become better people. They lose something important, that allows them to imagine and dream. I already knew the outline of the story, because I watched the old film, starring Robin Williams years, ago. I will have a lot to think about once I finish reading this book.
I'm not sure if the second part is the best correction because I wasn't exactly sure what you were trying to say (especially the last sentence) so that part is more of a suggestion :)
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