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Peter Pan The reading is the the best way to extend the vocabulary, so I have began to read the story about Peter Pan by James Barrie. I thought that's easy and joyfully book, for it has been written for children. But it isn't. That's complicated book, but not just because there is many difficult phrases and sentences. It make deep sense. Peter Pan, boy that can never grown up, was created by J. Barrie in memory of his brother. Hi was dead, when he was 9 years old. Other children grown up, but don't get better. They lost something important, that allowed them to imagine and dream. I know the story about Peter Pan in outline, I seen the old film with Robin Williams years ago. And I bet content of this book will make me thinking, when I'll end up the reading.

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Reading is the best way to broaden one's vocabulary, so I have begun reading the story of Peter Pan by James Barrie. I thought it would be an easy and joyful book, as it was written for children, but it isn't. It's a complicated book, not only because there are many difficult phrases and sentences, but also because it has a dark storyline. Peter pan, the boy that could never grow up, was created by J. Barrie in memory of his brother who died when he was 9 years old.

The other children in the story grow older, but don't become better people. They lose something important, that allows them to imagine and dream. I already knew the outline of the story, because I watched the old film, starring Robin Williams years, ago. I will have a lot to think about once I finish reading this book.

I'm not sure if the second part is the best correction because I wasn't exactly sure what you were trying to say (especially the last sentence) so that part is more of a suggestion :) 

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