my journey called "the english lenguage" part I
When i was 9, i felt very interested (very obssesed, indeed) about the english lenguage, my mother gave some audio tape courses so i can learn the basics, and i listened over and over again.
When i was 10 i met a beatiful girl called lisbeth, my first english teacher. I always went to her for ask everything about english so i started to speak it with her at the age of 11. I must to say that i admire her so much that i realize i caught in love with my teacher, i was 11 and she was 22 (stupid hormones, ruinning everything).
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
1
my journey called "the english lenguage" part I
When I was 9, I felt very interested (1) (very obssesed, indeed) about in the english lenguage. My mother gave me some audio tape courses so I can could learn the basics, and I listened to them over and over again.
When I was 10, I met a beautiful girl called Lisbeth. She was my first english teacher. I always went to her for to ask everything about english so i started to speak it with her at the age of 11(2). I must to say that i admired her so much that i realized i had fallen in love with my teacher. I was 11 and she was 22 (stupid hormones, ruinning everything). (OR ruin everything)
1. To 'feel' is inside of you. You could use "felt interested' here, in a poetic sort of manner. I think more correct would be "I WAS very interested", Or "I BECAME very interested.."
2. The ending of this sentence "feels" very akward, but I can't think what to say instead. Maybe someone else can help you with this... sorry
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
