Alice

I was in a wonderful park. I was reading a card of from an interesting person called (1) Alice. She gave me this note and rapidly (2) disappeared. I couldn't understand this situation. She seemed scared. Then I opened the note and I started to read it. “Hi, my name is Alice. Might you be able to put on a mask to speak with me? I'll be here at eight o’clock”. Suddenly a mask appeared on in my bag. After two hours, I went with the put put on the mask. When she saw me, she said to me “I've afraid to the persons I'm afraid of people but I want to meet a friend”. Since then I think about her. She´s a person interesting an interesting person because she wants to overcome her fear every time every day(?). But I believe that I'll not I won't meet with Alice again.

(1). A more appropriate word here is named

(2). A more common word here is quickly, but rapidly can be used also.

(?). I think you are trying to say that she wants to overcome her fear all the time but adding "every time" or "every day" is not necessary in this situation.

Great post!