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My Pets I just had one experience to keep pets until now so I am very impressed about that. And I think you might be surprised that my dear pets are three little chicks when I keeped them in my childhood. My dad bought them to me from the market where around my home. They are so lovely and I was so excited for keeping them. And I even didn't need to give them food at their eating time. Because there had a rice shop where opposited to my home. I was so clever when my three little chicks were hungry I just needed to chased them out the street to the shop. And the little chicks would eat the rice that dropped on the ground. The shopkeeper was a warmhearted person.He was very generous for my chicks's coming and didn't get mad what I do all the time.This occur me one interesting thing that one of them was lame. But it was very stronger and sometimes would fight with the other two chicks for food. And when I chase him his walking way always made me fun. I didn't feel he was poor but I did think he was pretty much hapless. He almost dying at one night. I just needed to give my cute chicks some water to drink in their box that I made it for them to sleep. Unfortunately, one night, the box get wet because of the water. My mother heard some noise that made from the poor chicks so she went to have a look and found the lame chick was wringing and almost dying. But she quickly took them out and dry the wringing chick by a hair dryer so the chick was be safe finally. And then my mother changed another box for them. I was freaked out when I saw my little chicks almost dying. I was so appreciated what I mother did at that time. When they grew a little up, one day my mom and I went to visit my grandma. At that night, we didn't go back home. I was totally not worried about my three little chicks because I thought my dad would help me to take care of them. The next morning, when I arrived home I couldn't find my chicks. I felt nervous and asked my dad. I couldn't believe that he forgot to catch them into their box. And I found at other places, the street, the neighbor‘s home, but nothing. My dad consoled me and he said that they would come home later by themselves. But they didn't.They just disappeared. I guessd that they might be caught by someone to cook for meal. I felt so sad and really regret that night I didn't come home. I thank my dad for giving me a lesson, you must do your own business by yours

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(At) That night, we didn't go back home. I had no worries (was totally not worried) about my three little chicks because I thought my dad would help me to take care of them.

The next morning, when I arrived home I couldn't find them. (my chicks.) I felt nervous and asked my dad. I couldn't believe that he had forgotten (forgot) to put (catch) them in (into) their box. (And) I searched everywhere, (found at other places,) out in the street, the neighbor‘s home, but nothing. My dad consoled me and (he) said (that) they would come home later by themselves.

But they didn't. They just disappeared. I guessed (guessd that) they may have been (might be) caught by someone to cook for a meal. I felt so sad and really regretted (regret) that night not coming (I didn't come) home. I have my dad to thank (thank my dad) for teaching (giving) me a harsh lesson, you must take care of (do) your own business! (by yours)

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My Pets

I just had one experience of keeping (to keep) pets up until now. (so I am very impressed about that.) (And) I think you might be surprised to learn that my dear pets were (are) three little chicks which I kept (when I keeped them) in my childhood. My dad bought them for (to) me from the market near (where around) my home. They were (are) so lovely and I was so excited. (for keeping them.) What is more, (And) I didn’t even (didn't) need to feed them (give them food at their eating time.) because there was (had) a rice shop opposite (where opposited to) my home. I was so clever. When my three little chicks were hungry I just needed to chase (chased) them across (out) the street to the shop (.) and they (the little chicks) would eat the rice that had dropped on the ground. The shopkeeper was a warm-hearted person (He was very generous for my chicks's coming) and didn't get mad with me. (what I do all the time.) It occurred to me (This occur me one interesting thing) that one of them was lame. However, (But) it was very strong (stronger) and would sometimes (would) fight with the other two chicks for food. (And) When I chased (chase) him I was amused by the way he walked. (his walking way always made me fun.) I didn't feel he was poorly (poor) but thought (I did think) he was pretty much hapless. One night, he was in bad condition. (He almost dying at one night.) I used (just needed) to give my cute chicks some water to drink in their box, that had I had made (it) for them to sleep in. Unfortunately, one night, the box became soaked. (get wet because of the water.) My mother heard some noise (that made) from the poor chicks so she went to have a look and found the lame chick was wringing wet and almost dying. (But) She quickly took them out and dried off (dry) the ailing (wringing) chick with (by) a hair dryer so it was finally safe. (the chick was be safe finally. And) Then my mother found (changed) another box for them. I was freaked out when I saw my little chicks almost dying. I was so appreciative of (appreciated) what my (I) mother did at that time. When they had grown a little, (grew a little up,) one day my mom and I went to visit my grandma. 


Sorry to hear of your sad story. Childhood memories you never forget. 

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My Pets

I am gonna to talk about my pets. I don't have habits like often keep dogs or cats to be my pets and I also hadn't keep this kind of pets ever before.I just had one experience to keep pets until now so I am very impressed about that. And I think you might be surprised that my dear pets are three little chicks when I keeped them in my childhood. My dad bought them to me from the market where around my home. They are so lovely and I was so excited for keeping them. And I even didn't need to give them food at their eating time. Because there had a rice shop where opposited to my home. I was so clever when my three little chicks were hungry I just needed to chased them out the street to the shop. And the little chicks would eat the rice that dropped on the ground. The shopkeeper was a warmhearted person.He was very generous for my chicks's coming and didn't get mad what I do all the time.This occur me one interesting thing that one of them was lame. But it was very stronger and sometimes would fight with the other two chicks for food. And when I chase him his walking way always made me fun. I didn't feel he was poor but I did think he was pretty much hapless. He almost dying at one night. I just needed to give my cute chicks some water to drink in their box that I made it for them to sleep. Unfortunately, one night, the box get wet because of the water. My mother heard some noise that made from the poor chicks so she went to have a look and found the lame chick was wringing and almost dying. But she quickly took them out and dry the wringing chick by a hair dryer so the chick was be safe finally. And then my mother changed another box for them. I was freaked out when I saw my little chicks almost dying. I was so appreciated what I mother did at that time. When they grew a little up, one day my mom and I went to visit my grandma. At that night, we didn't go back home. I was totally not worried about my three little chicks because I thought my dad would help me to take care of them. The next morning, when I arrived home I couldn't find my chicks. I felt nervous and asked my dad. I couldn't believe that he forgot to catch them into their box. And I found at other places, the street, the neighbor‘s home, but nothing. My dad consoled me and he said that they would come home later by themselves. But they didn't.They just disappeared. I guessd that they might be caught by someone to cook for meal. I felt so sad and really regret that night I didn't come home. I thank my dad for giving me a lesson, you must do your own business by yourself, don't take anything for granted.

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My Pets

I just had one experience keeping to keep pets until now, so I am very impressed about that. And I think you might be surprised to hear that my dear pets were three little chicks that I kept when I was a child. My dad brought them to me from the market near where around my home. They were are so lovely, and I was so excited to have for keeping them. And I didn't even even didn't need to give them food at their feeding eating time. Because there was had a rice shop across from where opposited to my home. I was so clever when my three little chicks were hungry I just needed to chased them out the street to the shop. And the little chicks would eat the rice that dropped on the ground. The shopkeeper was a warmhearted person.  He was very generous to for my chicks's coming and didn't get mad at what I did do all the time.This reminds occur me of one interesting thing, that one of them was lame. But it was very stronger and sometimes would fight with the other two chicks for food. And when I chased him his walking away it always made me laugh. I didn't feel he was bad poor but I did think he was pretty much hapless. He almost died dying at one night. I just needed to give my cute chicks some water to drink in their box that I made it for them to sleep. Unfortunately, one night, the box got get wet because of the water. My mother heard some noise coming that made from the poor chicks so she went to have a look and found the lame chick was wringing and almost dying. But she quickly took them out and dried dry the wringing chick by a hair dryer so the chick would was be safe finally. And then my mother made changed another box for them. I was freaked out when I saw my little chicks almost dying. I was so appreciative of appreciated what my I mother did at that time. When they grew up a little up, one day my mom and I went to visit my grandma. At That night, we didn't go back home. I was totally not worried at all about my three little chicks because I thought my dad would help me to take care of them. The next morning, when I arrived home I couldn't find my chicks. I felt nervous and asked my dad. I couldn't believe that he forgot to keep catch them into their box. And I looked for them at other places, the street, the neighbor‘s home, but nothing. My dad consoled me and he said that they would come home later by themselves. But they didn't.They just disappeared. I guessed that they might be caught by someone to cook for meal. I felt so sad and really regret that night I didn't come home. I thank my dad for giving me a lesson, you must take care of your own business. by yours

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