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Please modify my English answer. Q.Why would you like to attend this youth meeting and how can you like to contribute to this meeting? /(200~400words) ↓↓ Because I want to know what foreign students think about environmental problem and do environmental activities. In Japan, I know many students do many kinds of environmental activities. But most of them are Japanese, so they are similar to me in attitude. While I was staying in Sydney last year, I could know the EARTH YEAR campaign in the center place of the city. And my hostmother was not interested in environment in particular, but she sometimes talked to me about that by casual conversation. In Sydney university, I saw the students doing environmental activities, who belong to the organization for climate change action. And they also did a lot of the activities which I didn’t know an example in Japan. And just a short term in October, I participated in COP10 held in Nagoya city, I could widen possibility which NGO can do of my image. But in the international conference such as COP10, I felt the poor attendance of Japanese organization and just only a little people minded the progress about the meeting. So I think Japan is the developing country in the environmental activity. Therefore, I want to take opportunity of this meeting to do the activity in foreign countries ,and to have a new thought of my environmental activity in the country. And since I belong to environmental networking organization, I know many information about the activity in Kansai area, especially university students. Now I am assigned to the laboratory, and doing study the positive use of microbe. My characteristic is that I have two aspect of the student in science majors and the environmental activist. So I want to contribute to this meeting with the way of thinking of the science majors.

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Thank you for rewroting. And I recognized I need to study English more. If I passed that entry sheet, I will let you know.
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so i read what you wrote and i rewrote it to see if this was the message you wanted to get across...
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Attending this important youth meeting would be an immense opportunity to understanding foreign minds. This meeting will give me the chance to speak to students from vast parts of the world.  Environmental problems are world wide, but the only problems I am familiar with are the ones that surround me. Bering around Japanese natives limits my ideas in environmental activities. By surrounding myself with different walks of life allows me to explain my ideas as well as understand other ideas.

Last year I spent some time in Sydney, Australia. During this year I was apart of the “Earth Year” Campaign. During the campaign I spoke to many Sydney University students. A particular group that stuck out in my mind was the “Climate Change Action” group. This group engaged in activities that I would never have seen or thought of in Japan. These types of activities could help events like the COP10 held in Nagoya City last October. During this meeting I witnessed a lack of my fellow man’s presence. The number of Japanese organizations at this meeting was disappointing. With the help this invent I can help my organization become more aware of environmental activities. I can also be a leader when it comes to these activities in Japan.

I have two positive attributes to contribute to the meeting. On one half I’m a hard working science student who is apart of an environmental networking organization. This role has allowed me to understand and learn information about university students. Recently I was assigned to a laboratory, which studies the positive use of microbe. The other side is environmental activist. This gives me two sides of thinking when attending this meeting. 

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