I want to make friends
Hello,everybody. My name is Harry.I am from China.I am 17 years old.I am a student in a high school.If you're interested,can I teach you Chinese and can you teach me English？I want to make friends on italki.Can I make friends with you?
(PS:I am a dynamic Superman.Haha)
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I Want to Make Friends
Hello,everybody. My name is Harry, I am from China. I am 17 years old. I am a high school student in a high school.If you're interested, can I teach you Chinese and can you teach me English. ？I want to make friends on italki. Can I make friends with you?
(PS:I am a dynamic Superman.Haha)
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I want to make friends
Hello,_everybody. My name is Harry._I am from China._I am 17 years old._I am a high scool student in a high school._If you're interested,_can I teach you Chinese and can you teach me English？ I can teach you Chinese and you can teach me English. I want to make friends on italki._Can I make friends with you?
(PS:_I am a dynamic Superman._Haha)
Bionara's comments:
Don't forget to put a space after punctuation (fullstop, question mark, exclamation mark, comma etc).
It's better to write statements than (rhetoric) questions, such as the sentance about "can I teach you..." changed to "I can teach you...".
What's a "dynamic Superman"?! It doesn't make much sense in English :)
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hi harry, my name is Bellaneliz i'm from México so i´m not an english native speaker but if you want to we can be friends and help each other to improve our english. By the way i am 17 years old too, i am quite sure we can find many things to talk about.
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