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'competitiveness' Introduction. aplease check my grammar errors and if you have any natural expressions, please comment them As resources and opportunities in a society are mostly limited, competitions are inevitable for individuals to survive in the society. Some people believe that competitiveness, which originates/derives/comes from the competition circumstance, is necessary element for people's talents and knowledge to be developed, while critics argue that it has more negative effects on the society as well as individuals. In this essay, it will be explained how the competitiveness influence people and the society with both views before a conclusion will be reached.

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As resources and opportunities in a society are mostly limited, competitions are is inevitable for individuals wishing to survive in the society. Some people believe that competitiveness, which originates/derives/comes (모든게 맞습니다) from the competition circumstance (confused about what "competition circumstance" means), is a necessary element for people's talents and knowledge to be developed, while critics argue that it has more negative effects on the society as well as on individuals. In this essay, it will be explained how the competitiveness influences people and the society with both views ("with both views" 문법에 맞는데, 혼란스럽습니다) , presenting both views before a conclusion will be is reached.

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