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The Causes behind of Trend in Watching Foreign Films rather than Locally Produced Throughout history people have attempted to explore new tastes and nowadays this trend can be seen obviously in media, as people prefer to watch foreign films instead of locally produced ones. This phenomenon is understood by looking at how foreign films allow people to watch new places, cultures and customs and also learn new things. Firstly, while locally films almost have routine locations which people always face with during daily life, people are more interested to watch foreign films, letting them watch new places, cultures and customs. For instance, if an individual is watching an Australian film, it has this chance to see Australia’s environment; therefore, this new scenic scenes can absorb the person which locally films has no point in this term. This example clearly shows the primacy of foreign films by introducing new scenes. In addition to this, people can learn new things from forging films such as new languages, accents and places. As an obvious example, watching English films have converted to the main material to learn English. Such an experience illustrates that these days film regards as a learning material and among them foreign films have priority by having novel values. As the above indicates, introducing new places, cultures and customs and also helping people to learn new things impact on people to have more trends to watch foreign films rather that locally films. In order to keep balance and increase the quality of locally films, it is hoped government give financial support to native producer to be able to compete with foreign films.

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The Causes behind of Trend in Watching Foreign Films rather than Locally Produced

Throughout history, people have attempted to explore new tastes. And nowadays, this trend can be seen obviously in media, as people prefer to watch foreign films instead of locally produced ones. This phenomenon is understood by looking at how foreign films allow people to watch new places, cultures and customs, and also learn new things.

Firstly, while locally films almost mostly have routine locations, which people always face with see during daily life, people are more interested to in watching foreign films, letting them watch (or "see") new places, cultures and customs. For instance, if an individual is watching an Australian film, it he has this chance to see Australia’s environment; therefore, these new scenic scenes can absorb the person which when locally films has have no point in this term. This example clearly shows the primacy of foreign films by introducing new scenes.

In addition to this, people can learn new things from forging films, such as new languages, accents and places. As an obvious example, watching English films has converted to the main material to learn (or "in learning") English. Such an experience illustrates that these days, films are regarded as a learning material.  And among them, foreign films have priority by having novel values.

As the above indicates, introducing new places, cultures and customs, and also helping people to learn new things, impacts on people to have more trends to watch foreign films, rather that locally films. In order to keep balance and increase the quality of locally films, it is hoped that the government will give financial support to native producers to be able to compete with foreign films.  

 

*The main correction is the use of "locally."  When you were using this word, you were using it to describe a noun (the films), so it is an adjective.  Therefore, you should use the word "local."  "Locally" is an adverb, which describes a verb, adjective, or other adverb, not a noun.  You could write "films produced locally," for example, because in this case, locally desribes the verb "produce."    Also, (and this is only my preference, and has really nothing to do with grammar), if a sentence is really long, you may want to separate it by forming two sentences, if possible.  :)

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