Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society.
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
When a child was born, the government takes a responsibility and parents in the first instance. Children will be taught by their parents, however children spend more time with family. Of course, as parents, they are most worrying of children`s future and to see them as a good member of society.
Kazakh enlighters, writers say, that `The first school for the person begins from his family`. From this statement follows, that the second school is a simple or elementary, primary school. In school, where they can gain knowledge and teachers are able to teach all of these skills, how to be a good member of society with helping their classmates. As far as I`m concerned, children learn or have already found the right place in society, accompanying with their lovely, responsible parents.
For example, I work at school and see various situation. Pupils who are under control of parents and their teachers replace parents` role at school, it means a double-sided upbringing. Which works very productively and happily. You can observe or clearly see from their behaviour and education progress. Unfortunately, children who have a very busy parents and no time for dedicating to their children, I can say with confidence, that those children are limping in education.
Anyway, believe that school is a place to learn to find or to be a good member of society with helping, of course, parents. They somehow know what their children need and want.
p.s. I corrected lots of time while copying the text to the document.
To be honest, I wrote 206 words, 50 min.
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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society.
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
When a child is born, the government takes a responsibility and parents in the first instance - (not sure about this phrase. Do you mean that parents are the people the child will be with most?). Children will be taught by their parents, however children spend more time with family. Of course, as parents, they are the ones most worried about their children`s future and who most want to see them as a good members of society.
Kazakh enlighters (or enlightened?), writers say, that `The first school for the person begins from his family`. From this statement it follows that the second school is a simple or elementary, primary school. In school, where they can gain knowledge and teachers are able to teach all of these skills: how to be a good member of society by helping their classmates. As far as I`m concerned, children learn or have already found the right place in society, thanks to their loving, responsible parents.
For example, I work at a school and see various situations. Pupils who are under the control of their parents and pupils whose teachers replace parents` role at school. This means (or creates) a double-sided upbringing. Which works very productively and happily. You can observe or clearly see that from their behaviour and educational progress. Unfortunately, children who have a very busy parents and no time for to dedicate to their children, I can say with confidence, that those children are limping along in their education.
Anyway, I believe that school is a place to learn to find or to be a good member of society with the help, of course, of parents. They somehow know what their children need and want.
p.s. I corrected lots of time while copying the text to the document.
To be honest, I wrote 206 words, 50 min.
Good job! The time you spent was worth it. :-)
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