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Is it my fault? It's incredible, when the weather turn hot i change my chlotes (pull down the shirt , the tie, the sweater and wear t-shirt, polo), like probably everyone in the world. Well, why after only one day my back became like wood, my neck shouting at me “use your scarf!”. Is it fault of Global Warming or it depends of my age?

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Is it my fault?

It's incredible, when the weather turns hot I change my clothes, (put away the shirt , the tie, the sweater and wear t-shirt, polo), like probably everyone in the world.
Well, why is it that after only one day my back feels  like wood, my neck is  shouting at me “use your scarf!”.
Is it  the fault of Global Warming or does it depend on my age?

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Is it my fault?

It's incredible, when the weather turns hot i change my chlotes clothes (pull down the my shirt , the my tie, the my sweater and a wear polo shirt t-shirt, polo), like probably everyone else in the world does.
Well, why after only one day my back became felt like wood, and my neck was shouting at me “use your scarf!”.
Is it fault of Global Warming or it depends of just my age?

 


Bionara's comment:

Really good work Roberto. Please note that we don't tend to say "the shirt" etc when referring to our shirt - instead "my shirt". I've also reworded your final statement to sound more casual and simple :)

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