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Passed out in office.... I passed out in my office this morning. As I said before, it is a open-plan office. Everyone saw me falling down and moaning like dying. Actually before it happened, I felt that I need to take a break. I felt awful and I didn't know what I should do. I stood up and stumbled to a colleague's desk. I told him "I feel sick, can you help me?" and passed out. Obviously he helped me because I didn't knock on desk or chair. I could not control my body at all, but I still could hear people talking. Two people held my arms and took me downstairs. After I was put on sofa, I realized more than 10 people were around me. I was sweating crazily and hoping I was not showing my underwear. Luckily, when they drived me to hospital, I already felt better. Moreover, doctor found nothing wrong. Now, I just finish a bowl of salad, noodle, an icecream and three pieces of chocolate cake. Lying in bed and feeling great. So I will end this article with "25 is a dangerous age".

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I'm sad to read this. :( I hope you get well soon. You should drink much during this heat and maybe buy yourself a ventilator. I'm sure it comes from the hot. And eat much vegetables I think this will help too. Take care!
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Passed out in office....

I passed out in my office this morning. As I said before, it is an open-plan office. Everyone saw me falling down and moaning like I was dying.

Actually before it happened, I felt that I needed to take a break. I felt awful and I didn't know what I should do. I stood up and stumbled to a colleague's desk. I told him "I feel sick, can you help me?" and passed out. Obviously he helped me because I didn't hit a desk or chair. I could not control my body at all, but I still could hear people talking. Two people held my arms and took me downstairs. After I was put on sofa, I realized more than 10 people were around me. I was sweating crazily and hoping I was not showing my underwear.

Luckily, when they drove me to hospital, I already felt better. Moreover, the doctor found nothing wrong.

Now, I have just finished a bowl of salad, noodles, an icecream and three pieces of chocolate cake. Lying in bed and feeling great.

So I will end this article with "25 is a dangerous age".

 

I am glad that you feel better Tian Yuan. If it happens again you should ask the doctor to investigate further.

 

There are just a few small mistakes with your English. In the last part you should use the present perfect because you don't say exactly when you finished your food and you are also referring to the present result of this action.

 

Hope this helps.

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